Website Review
La Luna Bella


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Reviewed by: Q, Justin


Review by Q, 2003 November 20, Win 98 SE, IE 6.0, 1024×768, Cable Modem

Layout: 10

I absolutely love the layout on this; it's clean, organized and easily acessible without being boring. The use of graphics was tasteful, and it didn't take me half an hour to load.

Navigability: 9

If you visit on of the links on the page, you have to use the back button to return to what you were originally looking at. Since this site has quite a lot of content, it would be impossible to include links on every page, but a "home" button might be nice.

Colour Scheme: 10

The text is very easy to read, and it's relief to finally see a pagan site that isn't fucshia.

Semantics: 7

A few mispelling and grammatical errors, but not enough to get anyone's panties in a bunch.

Originality: 9

This really is an excellent site for someone who is new to the craft. There is boatloads of information and links, yet is almost professional looking. If I were a newbie, the organization of information would make me trust this site than most of the other "beginner" sites I have seen. Then again, this isn't entirely a beginner site either, there is some stuff on there I didn't even know.

Delivery: 10

This isn't a website that screams at you "THIS IS WHAT WITCHCRAFT IS AND YOU HAD BETTER NOT QUESTION ME!!!". This is a website that was created with an open mind without being overly fluffy. Nice and balanced.

Knowledgeability: 10

Chock full of information for beginners and advanced practicioners as well.

Style: 10

I'm jealous, I want my site to look this good. Damn you Irena! :D

Fluff Factor: 9

Just enough light-heartedness to keep it balanced.

Cool Factor: 10

Tons of infomation and hella cool layout (I'm jealous) makes for hours of interesting reading and poking around.

FINAL RATING: 94% or

I have been having fun nosing around on here. Irena has done a beautiful job on this site and definitly gets my seal of approval.


Review by Justin, 2003 December 01, Win 2K Pro, IE 5.5, 1024×768, T1.

Layout: 9

I really like the layout—everything’s nice and clean, great use of colors, and appropriate use of graphics. (The only real problem is the “Top 100” graphics, but that’s a pet peeve of mine.)

Navigability: 7

The only navigation links I saw went back to the main page. That’s not specifically a problem, but some people like to have all the pages accessible from every page. (I didn’t do it that way, so I’d lose a point here, too.)

Colour Scheme: 10

Excellent. There’s enough contrast to make it easy on printers, but it’s not the stark “black on white” that can cause eyestrain.

Semantics: 8

Good use of English. I didn’t notice many spelling errors or major grammatical errors.

Originality: 6

It’s all original writing, but there’s not really that much that’s new.

Delivery: 6

It’s a bit academic for my taste. Frankly, it’s somewhat dry—not the warm, fun-loving Irena that we all know and love from her posts.

Knowledgeability: 8

What you’ve got is good—solid facts, good answers to some of the excesses.

Style: 6

Too impersonal. (Yeah, I know, I keep haranguing on this point, but it’s important.)

Fluff Factor: 9

I saw one—count them, ONE—paragraph that could be considered “fluffy.” You go, girl!

Cool Factor: 5

I hate to say it, but this is just so…distant. Frankly, if I didn’t know it was yours already, I could not have guessed it. This site looks like a collection of papers that you’d hand to a college professor—the writing is very good, but the heart, the passion, is missing.

FINAL RATING: 74% or

The most major change I’d make is to put more of yourself into the website. Hey, I’ll be the first to admit that my website is dry and academic, but I have to admit, so am I. J For you, Irena, “dry and academic” looks uncomfortable.

And yes, I know, at this point “putting more of yourself into your website” will mean a near-total rewrite, but I have confidence in you. Of course, I also know that your “copious free time” is anything but. But if you get the time, I honestly believe that putting more of yourself into the website will change it from a good site to a great one.


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